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for example vs in addition: is it a case or a second point?

Once you have decided the two sentences point the same way, you still have to choose between the same-direction transitions — and that is where the harder questions live.

Why it happens

The contrast/consequence test gets you to a shortlist and then stops working. Every remaining choice fits the direction, so students fall back on which one sounds more academic.

See the trap

"Urban trees lower local temperatures. ___ , a single mature oak can cool a street by several degrees."

"In addition" — implying a second, separate benefit.

"For example" — the oak is an instance of the claim just made, not a new claim.

How to actually fix it

  1. 1Decide direction first (same or opposite).
  2. 2Within the same direction, ask: is sentence two a specific case of sentence one, a second separate point, or the result of it?
  3. 3Example → for example / for instance. Second point → in addition / moreover. Result → therefore / as a result.

Practice this trap · 7 real questions

Each of these is a question from the free bank that turns on the mistake above — the trap is the reason its wrong answer looks right. Easiest first.

FAQ

What about 'in fact'?

It intensifies rather than adds — sentence two is a stronger version of sentence one. If the second sentence is merely another item of the same weight, "in addition" is the better fit.

How do I stop repeating this mistake?

Reading the explanation isn't enough — your brain needs to beat the trap on a fresh question. Practice the skill in the kaoshen.co question bank: miss one and it is logged with the exact error, then brought back to you three days later and again after fourteen.

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