The comma pair that changes what a sentence means
"The chemists, who wore goggles, finished the trial" says every chemist wore goggles. Remove the commas and it says only the goggled ones finished. Same words, different claim.
Why it happens
The commas look decorative, so students add or drop them by ear. They are not decorative — they mark information as removable. If a phrase narrows down which thing you mean, it cannot be removable, and it cannot take commas.
See the trap
The paragraph has already said that Okonkwo published four novels between 1991 and 2004. "The novel ___ she published in 1997 ___ won the national prize."
"The novel, she published in 1997, won" — commas mark the phrase as removable, but she wrote four novels, so it is the only thing identifying which one.
"The novel she published in 1997 won the national prize." No commas. Had the paragraph said she published exactly one novel, the date would be a bonus fact and both commas would go in.
How to actually fix it
- 1Delete the phrase and reread the sentence.
- 2If the sentence now points at something vaguer or different, the phrase is essential — no commas.
- 3If the sentence still identifies the same thing, the phrase is extra — commas on both sides.
Practice this trap · 8 real questions
Each of these is a question from the free bank that turns on the mistake above — the trap is the reason its wrong answer looks right. Easiest first.
FAQ
Is that/which a reliable shortcut?
It is a real convention — "which" takes commas, "that" does not — but the SAT usually gives you the same word in every choice and varies only the punctuation, so you still have to reason from meaning.
How do I stop repeating this mistake?
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